[쏘영팀] 염진호_Before(2011.01.26) & After(2011.08.20)

 Script-
Hi I'm Jinho and now I'm gonna tell about this year's resolution. First of all about English these days I'm train with Special training members Actually I'm not original Special training member but yeah 10 days ago They admit me so i can train with them now I'm the one of them! This is so great I Think I'm a very lucky guy There is great system in Special training team Maybe during the 1 year I can make it with my special training members Yah I'm sure And another part is confidence. I am major in magic. So I have to standing stage a lot of time. At least 1 time a week. but my confidence is not that good so maybe in this year I'm gonna fix my confidence to Perfect Last part is about my attitude yeah actually before joining this special training team I've never noticed about my attitude but some of my members said to me that I have to have a some great attitude so during the this year I'm gonna try and make it so until here thank you I was Jinho. Bye

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Hi I’m Jason and today I would like to talk about the crazy to get a perfect body. How about you? What do you think? Do you want to have a perfect body? Just imagine. If you already have a perfect body, what kind of things is going to happen to you? Maybe many guys or ladies are going to be attracted to you. It’s true but what I want to say is it’s just appearance. Even though they’re going to be fall in love with you at the first sight, if you don’t have your own attraction, they’re going to leave you. I know this society wants us to have a perfect body. But we have to be careful about this matter. I’ve seen a lot of girls who are on diet. I think every girl in this world is on diet. And they are not satisfied with their body even though they already have a perfect body. And sometimes it’s too much so it could ruin their health. But I think the health is first that the appearance. So you also have to care about that. Thank you for listening

느낀점

Before
추임새를 많이 넌다 uh, yeah 말이 느리고 생각하는것을 바로바로 말하지 못한다. Actually를 많이 사용한다. 딱딱하게 느껴진다.

After 
조금 빠르고 자연스러워졌다. 중반 이후로는 무슨말을 할지 열심히 생각한다. 추임새는 많이 줄었지만 아직 남아있다. 입모양은 예전이 더 많이 신경쓴듯하다.

앞으로의 방향

자연스럽지만 입모양을 무의식중에도 제대로 만들 수 있도록 노력해야 하며 말할 내용을 키워드 별로 정리해서 자연 스럽게 말하는 연습도 계속 같이 해나가야 할 것 같다. 추임새는 조금만 신경써도 크게 개선할 수 있을 것 같다.